- Title: Merman and Seawitch
- Artist: Moxxeh
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Description:
This is the first thing I have ever submitted in the art arena. I'm not looking for 5/5, just looking for opinions on how I can make this better and so on. So please no "You suck!! lol lol lol gtfo" , seriously, don't be retarded.
Thank you for commenting, giving out some drawing hints, or just voting in general! have a good day ;D - Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: merman seawitch
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Comments (7 Comments)
- savanna_lynne - 09/12/2009
- very good! i like the color work. i couldnt ever color like that -_-
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- Arided Zero - 06/22/2009
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So I'll post again for the good stuff xDD
I was amazed by how well you did the hands biggrin Most people have issues drawing hands at all (myself included), so when I saw how well you did the merman's left hand I was very impressed smile
Also the colors are wonderful. The way you made the witch have cool colors made her seem more intimidating than the merman who was done in warm colors. The warmer colors give him a kind of....friendly, good-guy kind of feeling.
Overall, I like it biggrin 4 stars (^__^) - Report As Spam
- Arided Zero - 06/22/2009
- The eye on the sea witch is a tad bit too low, which makes the face seem off, and on both of them, their shoulders are a little low. Try looking in a mirror at your own body and then draw yourself to get the proportions down, thats what I did (^^i) My only other complaint is the way the merman's stomach appears almost caved in, because you made it fold too suddenly. It would help if you made it ease into that belly fold and the ease out to the tail. Alas, I have run into the character limit D:
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- arethuza - 04/12/2009
- I think that it's really good, but i think you should practice drawing men's torso's (hell, so do I) but other than that really good
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- Alpha timber wolf - 04/12/2009
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Thats great!
You may want to out line the bodys a little more,
but other than that 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Dark Jester The Lemur - 02/10/2009
- Coloring style aside, the piece is really well-done. Mind the proportions given to facial features.
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- Anin Meister - 12/21/2008
- your colouring is great but work more on the seawitch's face and add some bubble effect (|^-^|)
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