- Title: Otaku gets the girl (maybe)
- Artist: Zack1031
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Description:
This is my first attempt at writing manga so it goes right to left (it confused me so much when first making the layout) I'd love to get any kind of feedback on is since I plan on creating manga for a living.
If you don't know what nosebleeds symbolize...then you're not a complete otaku. - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: otaku gets girl maybe nosebleed
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Stark Enterprise - 03/05/2009
- I thought it was really good. I can totally understand it.
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- Voa SL - 02/02/2009
- 4/5
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- Takunaki - 01/31/2009
- i dont like it reeeeks eww ple (@_@) 1/5
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- WovenRain - 01/31/2009
- 4/5 Not my type of manga, interesting storyline. Please continue your work wink
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- ronnie92 - 01/29/2009
- The composition is good, but you could have left more space between the panels- it would make it look more professional. You should also study anatomy a bit more, If you'd like to achieve professional level. Shading/gradients would also give an impression of professionality. 3/5.
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- 44hrygydi - 01/16/2009
- ok i understand the story line very clearly. i mean to me at least i think it is very clear and easy to understand. but the drawing is not great. maybe work a little more on the drawing. And i dont understand why Garlickeh says there no reason for the nosebleed. i am sure you can get punched and even though you wipe it the nose will continue to bleed later on.
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- Boundary Challenged - 01/06/2009
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hmm... It doesn't really look like you read it manga-style...
4/5 - Report As Spam
