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  • -One Track Mind-
  • Title: -One Track Mind-
  • Artist: XxDoubutsuka Kame_ch33xX
  • Description: Yes, I really question you're hero's sanity sometimes...
    But you must admit it! His mind is only on one thing!~(sexy person)~

    Please COMMENT befoe faving~!
  • Date: 07/15/2008
  • Tags: narutosasukesheezyartonetrackminditachi
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • [Kako] - 07/20/2008
  • (continued from previous post) You can also do this with western comics, the differences are really interesting.

    Finally, when you're going to post a hand-lettered comic online you need to write VERY legibly. It's pretty difficult to read what you've written, here. ^^; I'd suggest giving digital text a try. Overall, 2/5. If you practice your pacing and panel structure, I think your comics will become much better.
  • [Kako] - 07/20/2008
  • While the art itself is alright, you really need to study human anatomy. Your arms are all awkwardly posed and either too short or too long.

    I wouldn't recommend doing that tri-colour thing again, it really just distracts the reader from the comic. Speaking of distracting, your panels layouts are very busy and make the comic difficult to follow, try picking up a couple of manga and studying how the artist uses panel placement to help tell the story. (continued)
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